Thursday, March 12, 2015

almost spring

a cow’s skull
of polished bone—
through the orbit
of the eye
this patch of snowdrops

~red lights 10:2, June 2014

the slow chant 
of chorus frogs
near to freezing
my hands fill with starlight

~red lights 10:2, June 2014


  1. These feel like a "sequence" or "tanka pair" to me. The eery feel of the nature imagery in the first part and then the hope and joy in line 5. I also like the link between the two of "orbit" and "starlight."

  2. Thanks, Janet! I didn't write them as a pair, but, as often happens, they seemed to want to be together.