tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-195263882728412888.post7133577567471768795..comments2023-10-31T07:07:44.176-04:00Comments on The Grass Minstrel: almost springJenny Ward Angyalhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17919355983835030180noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-195263882728412888.post-14118833518578648842015-03-14T06:55:20.611-04:002015-03-14T06:55:20.611-04:00Thanks, Janet! I didn't write them as a pair,...Thanks, Janet! I didn't write them as a pair, but, as often happens, they seemed to want to be together. Jenny Ward Angyalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17919355983835030180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-195263882728412888.post-81790254117603178842015-03-14T00:02:52.885-04:002015-03-14T00:02:52.885-04:00These feel like a "sequence" or "ta...These feel like a "sequence" or "tanka pair" to me. The eery feel of the nature imagery in the first part and then the hope and joy in line 5. I also like the link between the two of "orbit" and "starlight."janetldhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17815491049216208161noreply@blogger.com