Friday, February 7, 2014

shafts of sun

raising the blinds
I let your words
pass through me—
sunlight streaming
through an empty glass

~Fire Pearls 2, summer 2013

I wake 
to find myself
dust motes shimmer
in a shaft of sun

~A Hundred Gourds 3:2, Dec. 2013


  1. Great, Jenny! I often wake up invisible myself.

    P.S. I added a comment - or thought I had - to your sequence post from the other day. Anyway, I think that's my favorite sequence of yours! All the tanka are wonderful; my very favorites are the first and the last.